Monday, 11th
March 2013…
Today is the day that we need to present our essay about drug abuse.
During the presentation, Miss Zu has given each a comment on how they write the
essay. Every group has their own mistake, so that Miss Zu had told us to
rewrite the essay by correcting the error. Each group had a problem on write
the body paragraph. The body paragraph must have a topic sentence and
controlling idea; at least 3 supporting details; at least 1 example and last
but not least a conclusion. After finish correcting the error we must print the
essay and give the essay to the rest of the class. That’s all from me for
today…
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